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    我的心灵之声

    作者 :范军成    来源 :平和网友    更新日期 :2007-10-31    浏览次数 :

    简述 :随缘和积极,看起来是不同的两种生活态度,其实,不然。随缘,随遇为安是一种务实也是一种平和;而积极,为自己努力营造阳光的生活和学习氛围,享受其中,也是务实与平和。朋友可遇不可求,就是道理。无论对待师长还是朋友。随缘,是一种平衡,更是一种平和。

     

    感谢网友范军成从网上投来他的几则英语小品文,叙说了他面对高考失利,如何面对自己,在英语学习的路上找到新座标的内心独白。本网站给予发表,并附有译文,同时也把样稿发给作者,请他指正。很感谢作者给编辑发回来他的自译版《心灵之声》 ,为鼓励学习和交流,两个版本同时并列,供读者分享。

     

                           Show My True Feelings

                                                

                                                             范军成

                                                        2007113

      

            In the reality, few companion is learning English with me, but I'm not lonely. Because: 
          The supreme happiness of the life is the conviction that we are loved!
          English learning makes me get to know many net-friends.
          English learning makes me and net-friends of different places together.
          English learning makes me near to them.
          No road is long with a good company!
          I am leading a simple life, but I am wealthy in spirit!
          I am not handsome ,but I have a lot of good friends!
          I am moved everyday
    My teachers, classmates and good net-friends, I think that anything they do for me is moving!
          I have lots of net-friends who is beyond 30 years old! We have no generation gap! They are very honest, and often leave messages for encouraging me work hard! They always open their hearts to me because I always show my true feelings to them! We do our best help each other for our common goal--Learning English Better! When they were told that I will take the band 4 English test, they encouraged me and taught me how to review! Much more moving, one of them sent me some books about English learning for free! I was really moved to tears then! I am so lucky! I really thank them all! So I must learn English well and never let them down!!
          I hope them happy everyday!
          Blessings on them and love them forever!!

           

                                             真情流露  (-)
                    作者自译版

          现实中几乎没有伙伴和我一起学英语,但是我并不觉得寂寞,因为:生活中最大的幸福是坚信有人爱我们。

       英语学习使我认识了许多网上好朋友;英语学习使我和来自不同地方的网上朋友在一起。英语学习使我和他们的心贴近。好友相伴不觉路远!

        我生活贫苦,但我精神充足;我不英俊潇洒,但我却有许多好朋友。我的生活充满感动,我的老师,我的同学,我的网上好朋友,我认为他们对我做的每一件事都是感动。

      我有许多年龄在30岁以上的网友,我们之间不存在代沟,他们都很真诚,经常以留言的方式鼓励我努力学习。他们之所以向我敞开心扉是因为我想他们吐露真情。我们为了共同的目标更好的学英语而尽最大的努力彼此互相帮助。

       当他们得知我将参加英语四级考试,鼓励我,帮助我如何去复习。更令人感动的是有网友免费给我寄来了英语复习资料,我感动得流泪了。我真的很感谢他们,我一定学好英语不让他们失望。我祝福他们永远快乐,我永远爱他们!~~

     

                                              我真切的感受

                                       Julia翻译  

                          

    真的,即使很少有朋友正和我一起学习英语,但,我并不感觉孤单。这是因为,人生最的大快乐,莫过于坚信我们拥有爱也能给予爱。

     

    英语学习,让我相识了不少网络朋友,英语学习也让我结交了生活不同地方且同在学习英语的学友,英语学习让我们感觉彼此距离的相近,没有比这更好,拥有更持久朋友之路了。我正过这样简单的生活,但我的精神是充实而富有的。

      

        我每天都在改变,还有,我的老师,我的同学和我的网友,我感觉,自己在变,而世界也因我的改变而改变!

       

        我不英俊,但是我有许多好朋友!我拥有许多网友,他们中有好多比我年长,年纪超过了 30 岁! 但我们没有代沟! 他们非常真诚,经常对我学习的努力给予鼓励和支持! 因为我总是将我的真实感觉展示给他们,所以,他们也总是对我付之于真诚。我们给予相互最好的帮助,为了共同的目标,把英语学得更好。

     

       当他们得知我将参加英语四级考试时,鼓励我并且教我该如何复习迎考,更让我感动的是,他们中有一位的把一些英语学习书籍无偿送给了我。我为此深受感动,真有些泪花在飞的感觉。我是如此幸运,我真诚地感谢他们,由此,我一定要把英语学得更好,千万不能让他们感觉失望。

    我愿他们幸福快乐每一天!祝福并永远爱他们。

            

              谢谢你的鼓励让我重获自信(二)

               一封写给我同学的信

                    2007-10-28 

    范军成     

    Dear Honey:

     

                   春天的消息
         
    We have not seen each other for almost 3 months, I am sorry for not being able to write to you any sooner. Please do not worry about me. Things are going quite well presently and I’ve already adapted to the new environment . How are you? I miss you very much!

     

          Do you remember? When we were in senior high school, we had the same dream – to get into the same University. You achieved it but I failed, I was so devastated and did not know what my feelings were during that time! Nevertheless , despite being really miserable about my failure , I was still happy about what you’ve achieved. I did not know how to alleviate my distress. I wanted to die! It was you who told me : let us forget it, and face it with the smile! Each person has his own fate, wherever we are, as long as we have the dreams we can change our fate! Those words gave me a lot of encouragement and my long-lost confidence was restored! I’m no longer that sad guy! New day, new start!     

                 

          Do you know? I’ve been crazy about learning English ever since I came here! It might because I have trully recongnized the importance of English or I have found I have a gift for English study. Perhaps, it‘s because my English teacher is a lovely and kind lady! She provided help and gave a lot of encouragement to me, each of her smiles will be the biggest award for me! How’s your progress in English learning? Please write to me as soon as you have the time!

       

           I am looking forward to your reply!

                            Cheers !

                                           Yours truly

                                          Fun Juncheng

     

    本文中文翻译稿:

     

    您好,Honey

      

           曾拥有共同的梦想
        我们快有3个月没有相见了。很抱歉我没有以任何形式写信给你,请不要为我担忧,事物目前正向好的方向发展,而且我也已经适应新的环境了。你好吗?我非常想念你。

     

       你还记得吗?当我们还在读高中时,我们拥有一个共同的梦想——进入同一家大学,你梦想成真,而我却名落孙山,面对这样的结果,我非常痛苦,无法用语言描述这种失败的感觉。然而,真正悲惨的不是我高考的失败,而是我不能正确的面对这个失败和挫折。在我感受痛苦之时,庆幸你能如愿以偿,进入理想的大学。我不知道该如何消解我的痛苦,甚至想到了死。

     

        而你对我说,打起精神,丢下包袱,请用微笑面对未来。你说,无论我们身在何处,每一个都有他自己的命运,只要我们去努力,只要我们拥有能改变命运的梦想!那些暖心的话,给了我很多鼓励让我找回失去的信心,恢复了应有的自信。我不再是那个患得患失忧愁的人,新的生活,新的开始。

     

        你知道吗,我从那时开始到现在,都非常投入地努力学习英语由此来到了这里。因为我已经真正地认识到英语的重要性,或许,我对英语有如此浓厚的学习兴趣,是我享受到由此带给我生活中的馈赠,因为我的英语老师是一位可爱而亲切的淑女,她给了我很多帮助,而且给了我很多鼓励,她的每一微笑,都是对我最大的奖励。你的英语学习近况如何,请抽一些时间,尽快写信告诉我。挂念!

     

       期待着你的回复。 干杯!

                                           

                                            你风趣而真诚的    Juncheng

                                                       

                                         Words Of My heart  (三)

     

          我的心语,说与你听

         
    In the past, I often spoke English to my English teacher. She was very willing to listen to me and was so proud of me. She thought me a lot. What a pity, she didn't teach me any more since  last term. I've been waiting for a teacher who can listen to me, because I want to speak, I want to speak out, but no audience .Hey, Do you want to be my audience?

     

          Now, I'm so luck. With a thankful heart you will be happy forever. I'm so thankful to get to know a good teacher again in the last semester of my last college campus life. I call her softly: 'Xiao Rui'. Xiao Rui is a lovely, pretty lady. I like her, like her voice, like her figure, like her personality. I like to, like to attend her class, like to talk with her, like to see her. Donor misunderstand,  I'm not falling in love with her. We are going to be a couple is not going to happen. She is my teacher, she is my friend,  in my opinion, she is my good teacher and helpful friend!...

     

    本文译本一

                    心灵之声

                                      作者自译版

                                 

                             范军成 

     

        过去我常常说英语给我的英语老师听,她非常乐意听我讲英语,为我感到骄傲!她教了我好多,遗憾的是,自从上学期她不再教我了,我一直等待一个老师可以听我讲英语,因为英语我想说,我想说出来,但是没有听众,你愿意当我的听众吗?


       好老师,开启绿色世界

        如今,我如此幸运!拥有一颗感恩的心,你将幸福无比。我是如此的感恩在我最后的大学校园生活的最后一个学期我又一次遇到了一个好老师,我亲切的称她小瑞!小瑞是一个活泼的漂亮的年轻老师,我喜欢她,喜欢她的声音,喜欢她的身材,喜欢她的个性。我喜欢去上她的课,喜欢和她聊天,喜欢见到她!不要误会,我不是深深爱上了她。我们成为一对,是不可能发生的事,她是我的老师,她是我的朋友,依我看来,她是我的良师益友!

                 

     

    翻译本 二         内心独白

                 julia 同题友情编译

                                                       

    感谢朋友般的好老师:

     

        以前,我经常和我的英语老师讲英语,作为英语老师的她,非常乐意她学生对能她讲英语并以此为荣,她很享受这个交流的过程。她希望我能通过交流过程,掌握英语的应用技能。

     

        但非常遗憾,她没有教到我们最后的学期。所以,我希望能找到一位乐意与我用英语交流的老师。因为,我很想说英语,但苦于没有听众,你可愿意当我的听众并和我说英语呢?

     

            而如今,我是如此幸运,拥有感恩之心,你将永远拥有快乐。

     

        在我大学就学的最后学期,我再一次相遇到一位优秀的英语老师,我给她打电话,小瑞(Xiao Rui)小瑞是一位可爱有美丽的优雅的淑女。我喜欢她,喜欢她的声音,喜欢她的个性,喜欢她优雅的身姿,喜欢与她聊天,喜欢上她的课,喜欢听她讲课动人的声音。你可别误会,以为我是爱上了她,不,那可不是情恋之爱,她是我的老师,我的朋友。在我看来,她可真是我学生生涯中的一个好老师,给我真诚帮助的好朋友。                            

                               

                              Making friends with you    (四)

     

            I like making friends with you. To make friends with you I take the initiative.    Having friends can make all difference for me. I'm hungry for friends' love, why some friends are so cold to me? Although they and me have little in common I still hope that I can be their good friend. I donot understand what on earth makes me sink into despair on my way to them. I lost all my control and burst into tears. Please give me a chance once more. I will make the most of it and put my best foot forward. When all things I should say and do have been said and done is say: making friends with you!~

     

    上文翻译:     我愿和你成朋友

     

                 我愿与你成朋友
        我
    愿和你成朋友,我将主动走向你,我深信,朋友将给我的生活带来新变化。我对朋友都是那么无保留地付出了我的热情和真诚,可为何他们中有一些对我还是如此冰冷,拒人千里呢?

     

        虽然,我们之间也有共同兴趣和爱好,尽管如此,我还是衷心希望我们能成为好朋友。我不知道在我人生旅程中,我很绝望不知该如何去赢得他们成为我的真心朋友。请再给我一个机会,在我失去控制情不自禁流泪之时,我将投入更多并辅诸予实际行动,行动是最好的语言,我以我心,我的真诚对你说,我愿与你成为好朋友。

     

    编译 ;洪秀娟 Julia

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